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Betrayal by *Meerin:iconMeerin:

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"You would turn your back on your own kind, lay down all you have ever believed in and supported? You would betray your father and the men that follow you? All for the protection of a single girl?

I would..

Then Archangel Shoul Riven. You are nothing but an enemy to our kind. I would ask that you leave before I must be the one to harm who we trusted most..."

(EDIT!!)

Let me know if you like the changes or if the older one was better.

Changes are.

I shaded him more EX. The shadow on his chest and the darker colors all over.

I gave him a sort of glow to show off more of the angelic feel.

I kinda toned down the brightness not a whole lot though.

More definition to his face. He needed that.

Shoul leaving the angels :)

I havent drawn much of him, poor guy. Ah well he deserved a good pic.

Character belongs to me and ~Cloud1314
Art by Me

Critiques


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=Lumaris Apr 11, 2009, 3:54:44 PM
I love the composition. You balanced the picture very well, and the colors are great. The impact is profound as well; the viewer would not need to read the comments to understand it, I think. It can tell a hundred stories. :D

The only thing that stands out as off is his head. You painted it exquisitely; the details in his hair and face is great. However, it looks odd in comparison to his neck. It could be me though, it's hard to tell.

If it is, the only suggestion I could give would be to look at a reference photo (or have someone mimic the pose) and compare. If it is off, you can loosely sketch how it's supposed to be on a layer above the art and you'd probably have to repaint a lot of it.

It's up to you though. Regardless, I think it's a great picture and it clearly shows your aspiring talent. Keep it up. :)
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~WolfenFire Apr 5, 2009, 8:40:21 PM
Awsome! The wings are so realistic! Nice work. :+fav:

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I don't care what they do,
I just wanted to say
that I fucking love you. <3
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*Talia-May Apr 5, 2009, 8:59:39 PM
Very beautiful. Nice work on the wings.

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~Yanamari Apr 5, 2009, 9:03:24 PM
That's awesome! c:
The wings are magnificent!

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"I reject your reality and substitute my own!"

Xyana / Yanamari Asakura @ Gaiaonline
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*Meerin Apr 5, 2009, 9:30:08 PM
thank you! ^^

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*Meerin Apr 5, 2009, 9:30:30 PM
thank you! :)

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~Mecredie Apr 5, 2009, 10:03:41 PM
very beautyfull:D
love thedetails and the wings :)
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*Meerin Apr 5, 2009, 10:33:32 PM
^^ thank you

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*Meerin Apr 5, 2009, 10:59:23 PM
^^ thank you!

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