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"You would turn your back on your own kind, lay down all you have ever believed in and supported? You would betray your father and the men that follow you? All for the protection of a single girl?

I would..

Then Archangel Shoul Riven. You are nothing but an enemy to our kind. I would ask that you leave before I must be the one to harm who we trusted most..."

(EDIT!!)

Let me know if you like the changes or if the older one was better.

Changes are.

I shaded him more EX. The shadow on his chest and the darker colors all over.

I gave him a sort of glow to show off more of the angelic feel.

I kinda toned down the brightness not a whole lot though.

More definition to his face. He needed that.

Shoul leaving the angels :)

I havent drawn much of him, poor guy. Ah well he deserved a good pic.

Character belongs to me and ~Cloud1314
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Critique by =Lumaris Apr 11, 2009, 4:54:44 PM
I love the composition. You balanced the picture very well, and the colors are great. The impact is profound as well; the viewer would not need to read the comments to understand it, I think. It can tell a hundred stories. :D

The only thing that stands out as off is his head. You painted it exquisitely; the details in his hair and face is great. However, it looks odd in comparison to his neck. It could be me though, it's hard to tell.

If it is, the only suggestion I could give would be to look at a reference photo (or have someone mimic the pose) and compare. If it is off, you can loosely sketch how it's supposed to be on a layer above the art and you'd probably have to repaint a lot of it.

It's up to you though. Regardless, I think it's a great picture and it clearly shows your aspiring talent. Keep it up. :)
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~maiko-raivaru Apr 13, 2009
gorgious wings :D amazing pic. love it.
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*Meerin Apr 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
=D thank you, his wings are really popular :XD:

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~maiko-raivaru Apr 14, 2009
yes they seem to be.
i have a hang up about wings, some people add an extra joint so that wings resemble arms... really throws me.
yours, however, are perfect bird-like representations. :D well done!
(god i'm such a geek!) :o
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~0r4nos Apr 11, 2009
Great, but I'm with Lumaris on the head/neck thing.

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*Meerin Apr 11, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah I agree all the way with that.

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~WillowEscapee Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see the changes o3o They're subtle, but they're nice touches :D

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*Meerin Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
^^ thanks, I wanted to make it look a bit more realistic.

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*Emergencyuseonly Apr 10, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Wow nice one Jen! OoO I really like how you did the wings and clouds!^^ YOU MUST TEACH ME!!!!!!!! Come over anytime!!

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*Meerin Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:XD: I would love to teach you ^^

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*Emergencyuseonly Apr 10, 2009  Student Digital Artist
YAAAAAY! XD

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